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A brilliant chapter! I love how Mikey has a background story being slowly introduced, it gives the story a great vibe! I find it easy to read and i think it will become a great story and you will become a well known writer! Honestly I was too engrossed in the story to care about grammatical errors and truth being I could barely find any mistakes. The story is one that will be read by many with ease, Keep up the great work and I and your fans will support you all the way! I hope to see another instalment soon because I'm hanging in tere waiting for it ! :D
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:icongorebeecormick:
GoreBeeCormick Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student Writer
D'aww, thank you. English isn't my first language (; and I sifted through this very quickly. I have no editor and half the time, I'm pulling my hair out for one! (haha) Thank you, though. It was a very kind and generous critique! (:
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:iconfuckwhatislife:
fuckwhatislife Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you too! ^_^
Oh if you ever need an editor just ask me!
I'm Australian :)
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:icongorebeecormick:
GoreBeeCormick Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Writer
Awww, I'll give you a shout whenever I need ya! C: thank you for the kind offer!
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:iconfuckwhatislife:
fuckwhatislife Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Anytime ^_^
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:icongorebeecormick:
GoreBeeCormick Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Writer
(: will do!
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fuckwhatislife Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
^_^
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