Waycest: Chocolate Drops 02
A brilliant chapter! I love how Mikey has a background story being slowly introduced, it gives the story a great vibe! I find it easy to read and i think it will become a great story and you will become a well known writer! Honestly I was too engrossed in the story to care about grammatical errors and truth being I could barely find any mistakes. The story is one that will be read by many with ease, Keep up the great work and I and your fans will support you all the way! I hope to see another instalment soon because I'm hanging in tere waiting for it !
Stay dirty and Stay Dangerous!
Cahita82 -Exterminator Baby-
D'aww, thank you. English isn't my first language (; and I sifted through this very quickly. I have no editor and half the time, I'm pulling my hair out for one! (haha) Thank you, though. It was a very kind and generous critique! (: